From this feedback we decided to re film the scene with Erica and Adam sitting at the table and frame them differently as well as add in a shot of the present and Erica waking up.
As well as re film the scenes in the woods and give Erica a line just before the rape scene such as "Where are we going, I thought we was going to church?" this will then give Tom motivation for attacking her and so the the scene will then make more scene rather than him just attacking her.
We are also going to add in the scenes after the flashback so Erica and Adam talking in the living room straight after the flashback and Erica in her bedroom going through a box of belongings.
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